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The 27 Best Copywriting Formulas
for Telling a Captivating Story Online

1. Before — After — Bridge

Before — Here’s your world …

After — Imagine what it’d be like, having Problem A solved …

Bridge — Here’s how to get there.

Example:

2. Problem — Agitate — Solve

Identify a problem

Agitate the problem

Solve the problem

Example:

3. Features — Advantages — Benefits (FAB)

Features — What you or your product can do

Advantages — Why this is helpful

Benefits — What it means for the person reading

Example:

4. The 4 C’s

  1. Clear
  2. Concise
  3. Compelling
  4. Credible

Example:

5. The 4 U’s

Useful — Be useful to the reader

Urgent — Provide a sense of urgency

Unique — Convey the idea that the main benefit is somehow unique

Ultra-specific — Be ultra-specific with all of the above

Example:

6. Attention — Interest — Desire — Action (AIDA)

Attention — Get the reader’s attention

Interest — Interesting and fresh information that appeals to the reader

Desire — Benefits of your product/service/idea and proof that it does what you say

Action — Ask for a response

Example:

7. A FOREST

A — Alliteration
F — Facts
O — Opinions
R — Repetition
E — Examples
S — Statistics
T — Threes (Repeat something three times to make it memorable.)

Example:

8. The 5 basic objections

1. I don’t have enough time.

2. I don’t have enough money.

3. It won’t work for me.

4. I don’t believe you.

5. I don’t need it.

Example:

9. Picture — Promise — Prove — Push (PPPP)

Picture — Paint a picture that gets attention and creates desire

Promise — Describe how your product/service/idea will deliver

Prove — Provide support for your promise

Push — Ask your reader to commit

Example:

10. The psychological pull of Open Loops

Create a cliffhanger with your content

Via Felicia Spahr, KISSmetrics:

Open Loops in TV shows are the equivalent of that cliffhanger that keeps you up at night, consuming your mind with thinking about what’s going to happen the next week, or that story line that was never quite explained. Those aren’t just “blips” in a script. They are put there so that it’s harder for people to get up off the couch than it is to stay and watch “just one more episode.”

Example:

11. The Reader’s Digest blueprint

According to famed copywriter John Caples, you can take great inspiration from studying the way that Reader’s Digest articles are composed.

They are fact-packed

They are telegraphic

They are specific

There are few adjectives

They arouse curiosity

Example:

Copyblogger’s Demian Farnworth and Jerod Morris put this formula to good use in the way they open blogposts. Here’s what they’ve learned:

  • Your opening sentence should be short — even as short as one word
  • The wrong quote can repel readers
  • A great story begins in the chaotic middle
  • You borrow liberally from your swipe file

On social media, the Reader’s Digest blueprint might look like this:

12. Sonia Simone’s 5 Pieces Every Great Marketing Story Needs

1. You need a hero

2. You need a goal

3. You need conflict

4. You need a mentor

5. You need a moral

Example:

13. Write to one person

Good advertising is written from one person to another.

Example:

14. The 3 Reasons Why

Why are you the best?

Why should I believe you?

Why should I buy right now?

Example:

15. Star — Story — Solution

Star — The main character of your story

Story — The story itself

Solution — An explanation of how the star wins in the end

Example:

16. Star — Chain — Hook

Star — Your product/service/idea

Chain — A series of facts, sources, benefits, and reasons

Hook — The call to action

Example:

17. Awareness — Comprehension — Conviction — Action (ACCA)

Awareness — Present the situation or problem

Comprehension — Help your reader understand how it affects them. Explain that you have the solution.

Conviction — Create a desire and conviction in your reader to use your solution.

Action — Call to action

Example:

18. The 1–2–3–4 Formula for Persuasive Copy

1. What I’ve got for you

2. What it’s going to do for you

3. Who am I?

4. What you need to do next

Example:

19. So what?

Every time you state something, ask yourself, “So what?”

Helen Nesterenko, writing at the Eloqua blog, has a great way of spinning this one from a features vs. benefits perspective.

Our knives have the sharpest blades!

So what?

So you can chop ingredients quickly and efficiently, just like the pros!

Example:

20. AICPBSAWN (phew!)

Attention — Biggest benefit, biggest problem you can solve, USP

Interest — Reason why they should be interested in what you have to say

Credibility — Reason why they should believe you

Prove — Prove what you are claiming is true

Benefits — List them all (use bullets)

Scarcity — Create scarcity

Action — Tell them precisely what to do

Warn — What will happen if they don’t take action

Now — Motivate them to take action now

Example:

21. String of Pearls

String together a series of persuasive stories

Examples:

22. The Fan Dancer

Be specific without actually explaining anything

What is a “fan dancer”? Well, it’s nothing really. But it does pique interest! And that’s the point. The Fan Dancer formula uses specific details to create curiosity, all the while never revealing any actual information about what that tantalizing something is. To find out, someone will need to click or keep reading.

Example:

23. The Approach Formula

Arrive at the problem

Propose a solution

Persuade the listener why your solution will work

Reassure that you and your solution can be trusted

Orchestrate an opportune opportunity to sell

Ask for the order (or response)

Example:

24. Bob Stone’s Gem

Begin with your strongest benefit

Expand on the most important benefit

Tell exactly and in detail what they are going to get, including all the features and benefits

Back up your statements with support copy

Tell them what they’ll lose if they don’t act

Sum up the most important benefits

Make your call to action. Tell them to “reply now” and give a good, logical reason why they should.

Example:

25. The 6+1 model

1. Context

2. Attention

3. Desire

4. The gap

5. Solution

6. Call to action

+1. Credibility

Example:

26. UPWORDS Formula

Universal Picture Words Or Relatable, Descriptive Sentences

Example:

27. OATH Formula

The four stages of your market’s awareness of your product/service/idea.

Oblivious

Apathetic

Thinking

Hurting

Example:

The best copywriting formula: Yours!

There’s this great quote from David Ogilvy that sums up the matter of copywriting formulas.

Repeat your winners. Scores of great advertisements have been pulled before they’ve begun to payoff. Readership can actually increase with repetition — up to five repetitions.

Which formulas do you use in your writing? Did you have a favorite one from this list? Which ones did we leave out?

Add a response to our story here, or drop us a note!

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